Nov 16, 2012 - 
Communication 
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Communication 1 Comment Q and A discussing fate in Romeo an Juliet
“These violent delights have violent ends” this is a quote from the play Romeo and Juliet, this is a key reference on the subject of fate in the play which it is mainly based upon. Fate is revealed in Romeo and Juliet and many ways, but of the most important is through the plot device of co-incidence. Many things in the play happened by co-incidence like how Romeo went to the capulet party, he went there to meet rosiline but not to full in love with Juliet, it was just by co-incidence that they met and fell in love that night.
Joe,
I’m thrilled to see your writing developing so well. This paragraph shows an ability to express the over-all ideas (Shakespeare’s theme of fate) as well as delve into specifics and detail.
I suggest you use a quotation to further support your reference to fate at the Capulet party. You may want to look at the sentence structure here too:
“this is a quote from the play Romeo and Juliet, this is a key reference on the subject of fate in the play which it is mainly based upon.”
(That should be two sentences)
Nice work, Joe
CW